Writing Your
Success Stories, Goals, How You Can Help, and Credibility Text Box
Your
case statement is almost ready! In my
previous two posts, you learned how to write your Did You Know, Mission, Vision
and Unique Approach Sections. Now I will show you have to complete your case statement through writing a compelling success story, articulating specific and measurable goals, how people can help your organization and what you need to include in your credibility text box located on the left hand side of your page.
Section #5 –
Success Stories
The
purpose of your professional case statement is to inspire people to want to
help. Nothing inspires people more than
bringing your mission to life through stories.
Your case statement should include at least one success story that
illustrates the magic of your unique approach.
The formula for an effective success story is: What was the situation or challenges before
this person came to your school or organization + What happened at your school
or organization + What does the future look like now and what are the person’s
goals after benefiting by your organization’s mission.
“I dropped out of school
when I was in the 10th grade.
By 16, I was pregnant and married.
I raised two children who finished school and some college. I took care of my grandchildren so that my
children could work. I’ve been a housekeeper for over 20 years.
Now I find myself at 52,
divorced and no more children to care for.
One day I passed the SOS Center and saw a sign on the lawn, Free GED
Classes. I went in and signed up. I’ve been going to the classes three days a
week, for a year. The classes are not
easy; I can’t tell you how many times I’ve wanted to just give up, but I keep
coming back because I’m doing this for me, and I want a victory!
I’m so grateful for this
lab; I have this opportunity to achieve something that I passed up a long time
ago. I’m sure everyone here feels the
same way. Thank you for your continued
support of the lab.”
Darlene has since earned
her GED in June 2011. But the big news
is that she scored a perfect 800 on her Reading Test where a score of 410 is
all that is required to pass!
Example
– Mt. Lebanon Lutheran School
Twins, Miguel and Tito, came to Mt. Lebanon for 4th
grade barely reading at a 2nd grade level, way behind in math and
not engaged in school. Being premature
babies, tragically, their family was told not to expect high academic
success. Immersed in a culture of high
expectations and nurturing support they needed from teachers, today in 8th
grade, Miquel and Tito are internally motivated to succeed, and Tito will make
the honor role this quarter. Miguel and
Tito plan to attend WI Lutheran H.S.
Naomi
arrived at VCA in 4th grade illiterate
and with severe discipline and emotional issues. A well mannered and respected student of her
peers and teachers, as well as scoring proficient
in reading, language arts, math, science and social studies (WKCE 2009), she will graduate in just a few days and
attend WI Lutheran High School. Naomi
plans to study criminal justice.
Section
#6 – Achievements
I’m always surprised at how difficult it is for
nonprofits and schools to identify their successes and accomplishments. They are always focused on doing a better
job, which is a good thing, but people want to support an organization that has
shown it can be successful. It doesn’t
matter if you’re not as far along as you would like. Share your successes to get people excited
about what your organization is capable of.
Here are some examples of client successes.
- Ninety percent of our children are determined to be “ready for school” according to the Chicago Early Assessment and child developmental assessment administered five times during the school year.
- Collaborate with more than 60 partners, including physicians, nurse practitioners, dentists and the Milwaukee Health Department to provide immunizations, physical and dental exams and support services to 100% of our children at our sites.
- Staff people are among the most qualified in the field. One Hundred percent of center managers and administrative staff have bachelor’s degrees; more than 70% have associate degrees, and of that 40% are working toward bachelor’s degrees; one-third have worked at DCSC for more than 15 years.
Example –
Connecting Youth, Inc.
§
Served more than 150 young men since founding in 2002.
§
99% of these
men
successfully achieved their program goals and were reunited with their
families.
§
Tens of young men continue their relationship
with our staff, reporting education and
employment success and seeking guidance in overcoming challenges
§
100% of
staff
people have at least three years experience
working with at-risk youth, are enrolled in the Youth Professional Development
Program (School of Continuing Education at UW-Milwaukee) and complete 50
continuing education hours yearly.
Example – A2
Charter and Jackson Elementary Schools
- Jackson’s Magic Tree House Reading Center Project featured on the August of 2008 cover of “Teaching Today” magazine.
- 2008 Recipient of Sheboygan County Green Scene Grant Award.
- Known for strong education programming and extensive free-of-charge after-school enrichment activities. Only elementary school in the Sheboygan Area School District with a student-run newspaper and Yearbook Club.
- 98% parent and student satisfaction for 2007-2008 school year.
Section #7 –
Goals
Remember
the formula for sustainability through effective community engagement? Story + Direction + Strategic Relationship
Cultivation. Direction means being clear
about what your organization needs and how people can help. Everyone inside your building plus your
ambassadors must be able to articulate your top three priorities when it comes
to recourses. If not, you will surely
miss some opportunities when someone at the next cocktail party says, “How can
I help?” Some client examples.
- Provide a $3,000 annual stipend to every instructor, totaling $60,000.
- Increase our scholarship fund by $14,400 to allow 40 additional students to attend TBEY.
- Grow annual revenue to $200,000 in 2012/2013.
Example –
Wauwatosa School of the Trades
- Educate the public about trades as a true profession and trades unions as community partners
- Increase enrollment by 60% by eventually adding freshman and sophomore classes
- Increase trades instructor teaching days by 20 – $15,000
- Recruit Co-op Placement Partners to provide more opportunities to work while in school
- Transportation for students to trades training centers - $5,000
- Library renovation including trades books and journals and full library- $10,000
- Consumable materials and technology upgrades annually - $15,000
- CAD program and the training certification for teachers to teach it - $7,000
Section #8 –
How You Can Help
When
people finish skimming your case statement and they become inspired, they
should know exactly what they can do to help.
This section should contain specific items that people can help with
immediately. Here are some client
examples.
- Visit! Tour our school and witness excellent education and student success in person.
- Donate! Help expand our science and music programs.
- Serve! Contribute your talents by joining our Marketing or Fund Development Committees.
- Sponsor! Connect with our students, families, faculty and supporters by sponsoring one of our events, like Winter Festival or one of our Parent Sharing Nights.
Example –
Shiocton International Leadership Academy
§
Visit! See hands-on learning and global awareness in
action.
§
Give! Your time, money and talent can make a huge
difference.
§
Volunteer! Offer your home to a foreign exchange
student.
Example
– BHK Child Development Board www.bhkfirst.org
- AmeriCorps: Make a difference by serving in a school, child care center or community agency in the western Upper Peninsula and receive a $12,700 living allowance and a $4,725 education award for one year of service. For more information contact Chrissy Karry at (906) 482-3663.
- Volunteer: Assist in the classroom, extend school activities at home, participate in home visits, be a bus monitor, attend parent meetings or share your talents and gifts in other ways. For more information contact Lisa Schmierer at (906) 482-3663.
- Donate: The BHK Foundation was founded in 2006 by community leaders and parents to meet the need for excellent early childhood programs and educational support in our community. Your gift will directly support local children's services and scholarships for area students. Please send your tax deductible contribution to: BHK Foundation, 700 Park Avenue, Houghton, MI 49931.
Section #9 –
Credibility Text Box
Your
case statement should include a text box on the left side of the front page,
which lists the leadership, board members, major donors and supporters and
contact information. People like to see
what other people they respect are supporting.
For example, if you have received a grant from the Walton Family
Foundation, that fact adds credibility to your case for a lot of potential
supporters.
You
are now finished! Make sure you present
this document to your organization’s board for feedback, input and
agreement. Once approved it is time to
put this document in the hands of as many people as possible so that they in
turn learn how to speak of your organization, just as I described in the first
posting of this series.
If
you would like to see examples of some case statements, please email me at Deborah@alineaconnect.com.
I
look forward to hearing from you!
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